Infrared Sensing-Final Draft

Infrared Sensing

The animal sensor I adore is infrared sensing. Infrared sensing means you see and detect heat. Heat is seen as red, yellow and orange. Sneakily, a pit viper uses infrared to track prey. Infrared is amazingly interesting. 

Paragraph Writing/Editing

First Draft 

The animal sensor is infrared sensing. 

Infrared sensing means you see heat. 

Heat is seen as red, yellow and orange. 

A pit viper uses infrared to track prey. 

Infrared is interesting.  

Second Draft 

The animal sensor I like is infrared sensing. 

 Infrared sensing means you see and detect heat. 

Heat is seen as red, yellow and orange. 

Sneakily, a pit viper uses infrared to track prey. 

Infrared is amazingly interesting. 

Peer Editing 

The animal sensor I adore is infrared sensing. 

 Infrared sensing means you see and detect heat. 

Heat is seen as red, yellow and orange. 

Sneakily, a pit viper uses infrared to track prey. 

Infrared is amazingly interesting. 

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am thankful for my loving family, pets and friends too.

I love God and everything that God made

and you should too.

“Be joyful always; pray continually; give thanks in all circumstances, for this is God's will for you in Christ Jesus.”

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