First Draft
The animal sensor is infrared sensing.
Infrared sensing means you see heat.
Heat is seen as red, yellow and orange.
A pit viper uses infrared to track prey.
Infrared is interesting.
Second Draft
The animal sensor I like is infrared sensing.
Infrared sensing means you see and detect heat.
Heat is seen as red, yellow and orange.
Sneakily, a pit viper uses infrared to track prey.
Infrared is amazingly interesting.
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The animal sensor I adore is infrared sensing.
Infrared sensing means you see and detect heat.
Heat is seen as red, yellow and orange.
Sneakily, a pit viper uses infrared to track prey.
Infrared is amazingly interesting.
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